Room 8 has been learning how to add detail into our writing to make it more interesting. We can think about the questions: Who? What? Where? When? How? and Why? to help us add this detail.
We have recently started swimming again and chose this shared experience to write about.
On Friday Room 8 went swimming! It was fun. I liked it so much but, "John!" I said, he was following me. I went here, then he went here. I went there, then he went there, but I was also following Rohan. I followed Rohan because we were playing tag in the pool. I think we went swimming so we could chill out. Anyways, I was chilled out until John came... "Aaaaaaaahhhhhh!"
My Reflection
I think that I did a pretty good job of my writing because I added detail. I don't think it is too hard or too easy to add detail, it is in the middle. I think that the questions (who, what, when, where, how, why?) help to make it easier to add detail to my writing. I will try to add detail to my writing from now on to make it more interesting.